hottest mad sex ever. LOL

it rung a bell when bridgette said she wanted to starve than eat with logan...but now i'm pretty sure this is loosely based off beauty and the beast because of the whole wolf - her healing him thing.

The ending was sooooooooo from Beauty and the Beast

I loveeeedddd this 3

Just sonyou know I hate Julianne jus saying. Lol

Amazing.

Oooh, this sounds interesting, so far ive not been able to find any typos, lets hope it stays that way

I always love werewolf stories! Those are usually suspenseful, mysterious, exciting, and romantic! Well, your story had it all and more! You did a great job! I loved Logan and Bridgette! They are a great couple and this whole story got me sitting on the edge of my seat that's for sure lol!

You did awesome! Keep up the good work! Hope to read more of your stories!:)

oh btw

Spoiler alert:

The part after she changes, she's in the bathroom feeling lovey dovey feelings right? And Logans in his room wondering what she's feeling and asking abigail. They are mated, connected, right? So in fact, he'd know bridgette wasn't angry or regretful of being changed, he'd have been able to feel that she felt happy and in love. Inconsistencies like that can turn a reader off from a story.

It was... n't bad. Not something I'm likely to really remember having read a month from now though... it won't stick with me.

I think you are very good at describing scenes as well as characters personalities and appearance however the story itself is very cliche,rushed, simple and veeery predictable. If you had put as much effort into the story as you were putting into painting the picture of the story, I think it would've been a lot better of an outcome.

I'm a little disappointed to be honest. The beginning of the story was good, it grabbed and kept my interest but somewhere along the line, you lost something. It almost seems like you lost interest in the story and just forced yourself to finish it. SPOILER ALERT (don't read beyond this point if you don't want to know what's coming - although in MY opinion, you've probably already guessed): The part where julianne throws her to the wolves so to speak, that was understandably an event that would bring bridgette closer to logan, however the story went from night to day it seems. From hate to love with barely a breath in between.

I saw it all coming, from the beginning to end but I kept telling myself that it can't possible be that obvious, there's going to be some surprise. But alast, no, there wasn't. The second you mentioned the tree with the families initials, I knew they'd go back there and carve their initials, it could've been completely left out of the story. Orson and juliannes characters being banned... predictable and screaming of 'we were only added for the possibility of a sequel.'. All in all, it seemed juvenile and something a teenager would write/read. It had it's entertaining moments but failed to deliver when it really mattered. I walk away wishing I had chosen something else to read. I don't mean to offend or be mean, I feel that I owe writters an honest review of their story. Without knowing what could use work, you will never improve.

weee.. i enjoyed reading this! )

i like how this was fast paced and how you didn't add any unnecessary events or people.. everything is always relevant and kept as short as possible.. i was never bored..

the flow is smooth, the writing style is great.. i enjoyed reading the thoughts and emotions of the main characters..

warewolf/supernatural stories never really interest me.. i think this is the first ever.. it was like reading an actual novel.. )

thanks for sharing this.. great job! ;)

Awwwe I just loved this story. It was so sweet! The way it was in the beginning reminded me of the Hollows book series by Kim Harrison. You should check them out. You might like them.

Ive hardly read any of your story yet but i already have the upmost respect because of the within temptation lyrics at the top of chp 2. By far one of my favourites... It kinda suits your story! You have over 1000 comments so there is nothing professional i could possibly say that hasnt been said so i shall leave it at this! xD

Lady Femme Fatale, why have i only just discovered this master piece? I LOVE IT!

I'm really not a fan of werewolf stories..normally. But you have noW officially changed that.. forever!

Whenever i see stories on vampires or werewolves I avoid them like the plague, mainly because a lot of stories that i used to read, even published ones, just seemed so unoriginal and so recyled. The lead female always tends to be whiny and weak and the male is so predictable. But I decided to take a chance on this story and thank God I did! Because quite frankly it blew all my expectations out of the water! And from now on i'm going to give every story a chance even if it is something im not usually fond of, because it only takes one to break the mould. And your's has certainly done that!

After reading this in one go i'm now moving on to the vampire story because if it's anything like this, well, lets face it i'm more than likely going to love it!

Logan and Bridgette's chemistry is on fire and I loved the fact that they have the whole love/hate thing going on. I was rooting for them from the start and i loved both characters as individuals and together...even if i did love Logan slightly more because, well, it's Logan and i LOVE him! :)

I realise you posted this ages ago but when I love a story I love like this i think it's only right that i show you some love!

Also just to say thanks for keeping your stories up because generally the good ones always get taken down and then i'm left with nothing exciting to read but you've kept your fans happy and left your stories there for us to read till my hearts content (Which it wont be untill i've read them all..and then read them again and maybe once more for luck!)

Hope your doing well and keeping up your writing because you have such a talent! :)

Jade

xoxo

TEAM LOGAN AND BRIDGETTE:)

*daintily wipes eye* This was just too sweet!