Ah, I finally found time to read your newest chapter! and finally, it's revealed what the evil doctor 'took'.. but I have a feeling there's more to it than just that, 'cause that specific answer have been under my nose the whole time.. obviously, Christian lacks a soul, or emphaty.. the feeling to feel or something.
Hmn.. interesting..
After having read your message, I'm even more curious about what happened to you, since it was the inspiration to this story ;) Whatever it was, I hope you still have a soul and an intact memory..

My favorite 'quote' in this chapter, or something that really caught my attention was this "There would be no happiness without sadness; there would be no good without evil" it's probably been used many times, but it's something I've often speculated about.. simply because it is the truth.

well, thanksgiving desert is waiting :)
keep up the good job!

Is that a metaphor or did he actually take what you said? Either way, nice dah-dah-dah moment. I still don't trust this woman though, however nice she may be.

The story starts well, i am expecting to see even more brilliance at the back, i hope. Well, i will get down to reading the rest once my exams are over in 3 days.

This woman will either turn traitor or die, I've seen these kind of things before. Anyway, love the this chapter, since I am a heart a sentimental sap.

Da-da-dah! I like it, its like Se7en crossed with Blade Runner, except the protagonist is a little insane. Or not. I'm hardly a one to judge.

Man, I wish the chapter had been longer..
This just gets better and better. I'm still not sure where you're going with this, but that's actually what I like about it. Leave your readers in the dark a little and we'll keep reading to kill our curiosity.
I must know what happens next!

Again, I must say I love they way you write. It's kinda poetic, I think.. you got mad skillz son :)

Wow. I have absolutely no idea what is going on here, but the it seems the journey is everything. Some of the prose is incredibly deep, and you've managed to craft a gripping tale without resorting to melodrama or huge explosions.

Sputnik

Ah, a riddle wrapped in a mystery wrapped in an enigma wrapped in a trench coat. Love to know where this is going.

I try to give people some constructive criticism when I review stories here, but in your case, there’s no need for it.. not yet, anyway ;)
I’ll start by saying I love the natural flow in your writing (I hope I’ll be able to write like that someday) When you described The Wuthering Hotel, I already had the whole thing visualized inside my head, playing as if it was a movie – that’s when I know I’ve found something worth reading… alright, I figured that out a chapter ago, but.. now I know for sure. And I’m hooked thanks to your cliffhanger.
I liked how there was no dialogue in this chapter, only descriptions and an insight of Christian’s thoughts and feelings. You’re slowly building up the excitement for what’s next, and it’s no secret that you’ve peaked my curiosity. I can’t wait to figure out who the person holding Christian at gunpoint is… and what Christian is going to do about his current position. The last two lines, was just a perfect way of ending the chapter.
I wish I could have turned the ‘page’ and continue reading.

Interesting… See, this is what I hate when I finally find a story that is worth my time – I have to wait for the author to finish the coming chapter/s. Impatience is a weakness of mine, I guess. Anyways, I’m glad I stumbled over this fic of yours.. just when I was about to give up my search for a good read, I found something interesting - a story with descriptions, a clever dialogue and an intriguing plot. (I hate stories where I feel like I’m reading a script I already know the ending to.) But you caught my attention. I wanna know more about this Christian guy and who he is… or more specifically, what he is.
I will be waiting for your next chapter.
And oh, I have to admit, your way of writing kinda intimidates me. I have a feeling that you’re insanely smart and yes.. pathetic as it may sound, I’m intimidated by clever people.

- Anya