Ah, that's so cute. (happy face) glad there was a happy ending to this one. and again! the link. does. not. work. make it happen buddy [shakes fist].
catch ya laterz!

Check this: "nervous she trust[s?] him completely"

Aw, that is so sad, so are they gonna like have to break up why? are they CHEATING? oh that's so juicy, (laughing face), [only kidding].

in love and death, in love and sickness. (sad face).
well i know one thing for sure, you link did not work, you gotta separate it into bits. (smile face).
Good luck.

I'm gonna make a wild guess and say this is the one featuring Taylor swift in the song? hm? just asking.

check it: "I miss her so much and [I’m] come to realize that I can’t live without her".

that's too bad they fell apart, well you have to have some strong guavas to keep long distance a true distance close to the heart. :)

good luck writing,
*~+ricia~*

ha ha ha ha nice one.
is it gonna be okay? hm? i dunno, that's for sure.
i do know--that their rock band rocks. wot!

check it: "she would come up to my, hug my arm,".

reach for the stars fighting my buddy!
*~+ricia~*

i suggest that you put links to the song at the beginning or the end of the story. that would be major cool. yeah.

and this chapter, i liked it a whole bunch. especially how it ended and saying that he wasn't drunk anymore. this was a nice cup of coffee, very strong coffee. :)

reach for the stars FIGHTING!
*~+ricia~*

"I wasn’t sure what she wanted to her" [Hear?].
this was good, i can't wait till the other stories are out.
boys like girls is a rock awesome band
can i make a suggestion since you're doing these one-shots?
uh, my personal fav song by them that sounded better live... almost is the great escape song. yeah, i'm sure that's it. could you do a one shot on that? that be interesting. heh heh.
oh and ... uh, the structure of this first songstory looks weird. maybe have a break in that first paragraph? that would be cool.