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Anaben 2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Hello flies, I noticed something strange in line 3. Is there a reason that destructed is not destroyed?
Am I just being Freudian or is this poem simply moralizing about sirens and male 'harlots?'
La Terraza 2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Now, this is interesting. I don't like it. Not my taste.
HOWEVER, you produce a very CLEAR form of personality and that is excellent. And hard to do at the level you. So short a poem, so obviously written with character. Hats off to you.
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