This is a very beautiful poem! You almost convince me to use rhymes!

Not only poetic, this was really meaningful. The quote of Ecclesiastes at the end tied it all together. Real nice.

another great poem from you~~love the way you deliver your poem, not only beautiful in terms of the language used and the meaning, but also very beautiful when you read it out. the rhyme, the syllable for each line is just beautiful. great one.

Beautiful. There is such a natural rhyme to it, and a lovely flow. I really love the ending stanza. :)