 The Incredible Marksman 2009-11-19 . chapter 24Interesting read kel, especially about the naked girls in recent chapters I just read. O_o
But anyway i do say that i enjoyed it and am looking forward to the next chappy chap. Keep up the Awesomeness! |
 Eden R. C. 2009-11-10 . chapter 24 Kel you better finish this one!
I want to know what happens!
So Berry is the female version of Ryu right? |
 Tai Night 2009-11-08 . chapter 24Way to keep me on the edge of my seat Kel. I must say really enjoying this story so keep up the good work. |
 Munchin 2009-11-06 . chapter 24 It's good to see you are still writing this dude...keep it up.
Munchman |
 Tai Night 2009-11-01 . chapter 23You know I was not shock when I seen Ed fall for such a trick. Anyway Kel I want to know where do u get these Japaneses terms at.
And good j.o.b homie. |
 The Incredible Marksman 2009-10-27 . chapter 1So this is the story Tai night was telling me about eh? I have to say, whoever is writing this has some talent; to be able to get down someone personality who that havent known for to long and display it in an awesome story gains my crops any day of the week.
Keep up the awesomeness. |
 Daughter of Ether 2009-10-24 . chapter 23god ...
trust ed and D to fall for feminine wiles. how typical
!ja ne |
 Eden R. C. 2009-10-20 . chapter 23 Well I always get the girl...
And she loved my bad jokes!
When can we come back so I can ask her to marry me?
great job BBK! |
 Daughter of Ether 2009-10-16 . chapter 20wow. i must say im amazed no one else has made the news yet. or noticed you on the news. that selection of names is a bit suspicious for the rest of us not to start looking for you dont you tihnk?
~ja ne |
 Tai Night 2009-10-15 . chapter 20Lol that seem like something that Ed would do. I got to admit Kel you got my manna of talking and acting down. Even my home boy said it. Good work big homie. |
 Eden R. C. 2009-10-15 . chapter 20 Ah thanks Blaze this suit is bad **...
Of course he is going to get it with stains and ruin but it is okay.
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Eden R. C. 2009-10-15 . chapter 19 Nice going BBK.
Who would have thought that Tai would be the next person to find.
I would have guessed it would have been Munchin or Berry.
But it worked out a whole lot better. |
 Tai Night 2009-10-13 . chapter 18Yo Kel you did a good job with Major Bizon. I like him and keep up the good work homie. |
 Tai Night 2009-10-13 . chapter 17You know I can't help but feel bad for that old man that got rock. Other then that great chapter. |
 Ash the brave one 2009-10-07 . chapter 16Sorry for the late Review but better late than never right! Kel this story rocks! I wonder how you are going to get out of this one... *sits and ponders* You know I can just see me ruling a nation with fear in this story lol. Just kidding. Keep going Cutie Kel! |