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Kurogane Black Ninja 2009-12-06 . chapter 8
Interesting chapter, especially with bringing the Time of Ending back around through this story. It was an important part of Sacrifice, so I bet it's an important part of Shattered Illusions as well. Since Copernicus' is completely opposite from Fife and Vasca, it should be interesting to see how things play out.
Kurogane Black Ninja 2009-12-06 . chapter 7
Millie makes me laugh. She's a wonderful comic relief for this chapter. I also loved the action of the fight and Tsubomi's tenacity. She's a good donor for Copernicus. Lol, I have to admit, if I were Millie, I'd think they were pretty creepy too.
Kurogane Black Ninja 2009-12-06 . chapter 6
Tsubomi's thoughts about masochism are pretty funny. I also liked when she said that if she could go back and smack herself, she would. It's interesting how she and Copernicus played along in front of the yaoi fangirls too. They acted so casual being in a situation like that. It makes you wonder what would happen if they could develop a casual sexual relationship?
Kurogane Black Ninja 2009-12-06 . chapter 5
Poor Copernicus. I feel kind of sorry for him in this chapter. I think it was because he looked so pathetic being low on blood and everything. I hope that Tsubomi accepts the responsibility. It will be interesting seeing him draw blood from her, if it's anything like Sacrifice.
Black Bride Anna 2009-12-06 . chapter 8
Hey! Another great chapter! I like Copernicus' explanation of the Time of Ending. I hope it doesn't happen. Things would be extremely bad if it did, but knowing you, it will probably get half-way accomplished. Your bad guys are so totally awesome!

Update soon!
Dark Angel Hiroshima 2009-12-05 . chapter 8
What a cute ending line. I really liked this chapter, though I kind of skipped through the explanation of the Time of Ending because it was the same as Sacrifice, lol.
Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2009-12-05 . chapter 8
I think it's funny that Millie gets the cold treatment by Tsubomi. Honestly, she's only around because Copernicus made the mistake of teasing her.

Anyway, I wonder how they'll deal with the Time of Ending theory that Hide and Hizaki are trying to let happen. I want to see what exactly is going to become of the human and vampire world.
Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2009-12-05 . chapter 7
I'm with Tsubomi, I don't like Millie either. I find her really annoying but I don't really like most female characters. Tsubomi is like, one of the few that I actually like. I have issues and I'm picky like that.

You made a great fight scene too btw. I loved the fact that you made Tsubomi come out and kick some tail. I'm going to go and catch myself up on this story now. It's been a while since I've reviewed anything.
Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2009-12-05 . chapter 6
Tsubomi's lack of knowledge earlier in this chapter made me laugh a little. It shows that she's still naive about some things in the vampuric world. I really like the fact that Copernicus made her his donor and I don't think he did it for her to be simply a decoy. It's his little way of reeling her in. He's such a sneaky little thing.

I love how they messed with those yaoi fans. I'd do it too if I were a bisexual/gay guy and I had a friend around. XD
Lime-sama 2009-12-05 . chapter 8
Time of Ending is scary crap. I hope it doesn't happen and that they can stop Hide and Hizaki from pulling through with it.
Lime-sama 2009-12-05 . chapter 7
Copernicus is royalty? No wonder so many people are after him. I wonder what exactly he does. I kind of what to say he's a Duke/Earl/Bishop or something like that.

I love the cute interactions between Copernicus and Tsubomi. They are my favorite couple. I want them to actually get together and I hope that he gets her first kiss.
Lime-sama 2009-12-05 . chapter 6
Tsubomi and Copernicus are too funny! I absolutely love how they screwed with those fangirls but I feel sorry for the one who ran into Hizaki. I hope she'll be alright but I don't get good feelings about this.
HFGLF 2009-12-05 . chapter 8
The Time of Ending reminds me a lot of the one in Sacrifice. It's nice to see that the story's have a similar idea but different direction on each one. Fife and Copernicus are very different in thought.

I still wonder what position Copernicus holds in the royal court. He seems to have so much pain behind him and he's facing a lot of problems but I just know he, Millie and Tsubomi will make a good little family XD
HFGLF 2009-12-05 . chapter 7
I like Millie. She's very funny and we share similar interests. Nothing like a yaoi obsessed fangirl to throw into the mix. It's nice that you decided to make her stray away from the norm by giving her something that made her stick out.

Tsubomi is rather cold to her, and so free with her feelings. I imagine it's hard for her to hide her secret from Copernicus. It's so hard not to think she and Copernicus are a couple because they are so close to each other.
HFGLF 2009-12-05 . chapter 6
Man, I haven't been keeping up with anything lately, so I decided to come over here and give you some well-deserved reviews. This whole story is progressing quite nicely and I can see that it is by far the most unique vampire story I've read in a long time.

Hizaki's character has a lot of depth and I love the design that you have for him. He's so beautiful inside of my mind. There's nothing better than a psychotic, gay, sadist.

As always, I love Copernicus and Tsubomi. Their relationship is very charming. I certainly hope that girl doesn't die. I hope Copernicus and Tsubomi can save her or something.
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