""" "Yes, I am." Copernicus looked down, ashamed to admit it to her. It wasn't because they were two different creatures, but because this was something that would severely break their trust and he didn't know the girl well enough to know her reaction to the situation. """ - (((Quote from story)))

It's getting quite confusing. This bit had me think if Copernicus knew Tsubomi was in fact a girl.. but then I am reminded constantly in the writing that he doesn't know yet.

Either than that it is getting a little more interesting as far as vampire stories go.
On to the next chapter!

Chiisutofupuru

In the start I expected a highschool setting... and then you ended with stripper?! Already kind of interesting. The character idea is quite new to me.

Vampire stuff isn't my kind of read so I hope you've changed enough about them for me to like it.

On to the next chapter!

(Have you ever read the Black Jewels Triligy?)

Chiisutofupuru

This is awesome! Copernicus finally admits his love but what will tsubomi say?

Haha Coscatta loses. I don't think anyone wanted her to win anyway. I hope Tsubomi says yes to him. She'd be dumb not to.

YOU CUT IT OFF AT THE CONFESSION! Y U SO MEAN? I want to know what she said back! Omg you're so evil! Please update again soon and make sure that you don't leave off on a bad cliffhanger!

Seriously this is an awesome story and you should definitely update it more often. I'd love weekly updates. That would be awesome.

Say you love him back! Do it this instant!

I thought Coscatta would lose this battle. I wonder how she will take the news when she finds out that Copernicus is with someone else. The next chapter is sure to be explosive and romantic.

I still hate Coscatta. I cringed when Copernicus drank that whore's blood. I hope Tsubomi tells him that she loves him back and gets her out of the picture quick.

That's not fair. I want to know what the hell Tsubomi says back! Come on! Give us an update! Please!

they shuld kiss and get together.

GRAAAAAARGH... *begins ranting about hatred of cliffhangers*

It's nice to see Millie and Yale back together again. Maybe he can clear her up on what's been happening. I hope it put her mind to ease when he told her what happened and why he left.

Coscatta...what not to say about her. In truth, she's actually really interesting and we get a good glimpse of her past as well. I am intrigued about the bloody books and her brother's murder.

Those books are mysterious, and I'm beginning o wonder about Coscatta's brother's death.

Coscatta is hiding dark secrets. I know she is. I just want to know what exactly it is that she's hiding.

You're drawing up a great mystery here. I think Coscatta has a few skeletons in the closet. Poor Tsubomi though, but Coscatta's ways are just making them closer.