|Reviews for Shattered Illusions|
| Chiisutofupuru 2/16/13 . chapter 3
""" "Yes, I am." Copernicus looked down, ashamed to admit it to her. It wasn't because they were two different creatures, but because this was something that would severely break their trust and he didn't know the girl well enough to know her reaction to the situation. """ - (((Quote from story)))
It's getting quite confusing. This bit had me think if Copernicus knew Tsubomi was in fact a girl.. but then I am reminded constantly in the writing that he doesn't know yet.
Either than that it is getting a little more interesting as far as vampire stories go.
On to the next chapter!
| Chiisutofupuru 2/1/13 . chapter 1
In the start I expected a highschool setting... and then you ended with stripper?! Already kind of interesting. The character idea is quite new to me.
Vampire stuff isn't my kind of read so I hope you've changed enough about them for me to like it.
On to the next chapter!
(Have you ever read the Black Jewels Triligy?)
| MotherHonker 1/29/13 . chapter 24
This is awesome! Copernicus finally admits his love but what will tsubomi say?
| TerminalTragedy 1/27/13 . chapter 24
Haha Coscatta loses. I don't think anyone wanted her to win anyway. I hope Tsubomi says yes to him. She'd be dumb not to.
| Black Bride Anna 1/27/13 . chapter 24
YOU CUT IT OFF AT THE CONFESSION! Y U SO MEAN? I want to know what she said back! Omg you're so evil! Please update again soon and make sure that you don't leave off on a bad cliffhanger!
Seriously this is an awesome story and you should definitely update it more often. I'd love weekly updates. That would be awesome.
| Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 1/27/13 . chapter 24
Say you love him back! Do it this instant!
| Kurogane Black Ninja 1/27/13 . chapter 24
I thought Coscatta would lose this battle. I wonder how she will take the news when she finds out that Copernicus is with someone else. The next chapter is sure to be explosive and romantic.
| Yaoi LL Girl 1/27/13 . chapter 24
I still hate Coscatta. I cringed when Copernicus drank that whore's blood. I hope Tsubomi tells him that she loves him back and gets her out of the picture quick.
| Dark Kurogane 1/27/13 . chapter 24
That's not fair. I want to know what the hell Tsubomi says back! Come on! Give us an update! Please!
| MAMI07 1/27/13 . chapter 24
they shuld kiss and get together.
| Alyksandra Barqada 1/27/13 . chapter 24
GRAAAAAARGH... *begins ranting about hatred of cliffhangers*
| Kurogane Black Ninja 1/9/13 . chapter 23
It's nice to see Millie and Yale back together again. Maybe he can clear her up on what's been happening. I hope it put her mind to ease when he told her what happened and why he left.
Coscatta...what not to say about her. In truth, she's actually really interesting and we get a good glimpse of her past as well. I am intrigued about the bloody books and her brother's murder.
| TerminalTragedy 1/9/13 . chapter 23
Those books are mysterious, and I'm beginning o wonder about Coscatta's brother's death.
| Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 1/8/13 . chapter 23
Coscatta is hiding dark secrets. I know she is. I just want to know what exactly it is that she's hiding.
| Black Bride Anna 1/8/13 . chapter 23
You're drawing up a great mystery here. I think Coscatta has a few skeletons in the closet. Poor Tsubomi though, but Coscatta's ways are just making them closer.