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This is the way, the way we break
Moon-Chaser
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
I like this, the way that you drill the words over and over again, this must be really frustrating and sad, that this person never listens and never remembers.
Keep it up.
Little girl Big world
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
I like the repetition in this really drilling it into the persons head because whoever is being spoken to doesn't listen. Well done :)
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