I think you should expand the stories more. Theyare ood as is, but would probably be better if you added more of a plot, or build up, to the end.

Seriously, insanely, awesomely cute. All three of the stories, I'm just lazy and only reviewing once. Go me. Anyway. Very cute, and your characters were awesome, and their names were super awesome. :) You have a few grammar/spelling errors, but, overall, seriously kick ass stories. Keep it up!

I like the over premise and the different characters. The differences between the races was fun and an interesting perspective. I like the type of magic user is determined by descent. Interesting. There were some gramatical issues, but nothing a good beta couldn't work out for you. I light, fun read. I enjoyed it, especially the first couple.

These were so cute! I want more!