It's violent and one hell of a brash piece - I get the impression that there's this Something lurking around and circling the subject as the writer tries to intimidate. Loved the title and the nuances =) And especially your sense of rhythm (sp?)!

thanks for sharing~

Though there are a few flaws in the writing of this, it was a good piece. Super Ego seems to fit quite well for the title. I like how it drifts off at the end, leaving the mind to wonder and create it's own addition.

This part was worded very odd, and thus, didn't make much sense to me: "Let me tell something really stupid
though I’m not but I am like this!"

"The holes crack in your grave." Creative imagery.

"But you could be better." Hah. I like the tone of this line--it's very blunt and controversial.

"Sometimes, I cut you in pieces." Whoa! Morbid! :)