..hm...i like the feel of it ...please update soon ..

sounds good. :)

dude, is good. update.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

awesome so far. update soon, please!

great chapter

James doesn't seem that bad, well from the way you described his clothes and all.
I guess will just have to see as the story progresses.
I loved the name Jolene!
I can't believe her dad would force he to try and be a second grade version of someone else.
I like it so far and can't wait to read what happens nexr:P

Completely understandable. Loved the chapter, and can't wait to read the next 1 :)

she has nice friend one that leaves her all alone at a place she doesnt noe

Nu it ended! That sucks...I really wanna read more. So far its great, but (in my opinion) you put too much detail on the clothing in every single one of your fics. I like detail ( It would be an understatement to say that I love it) but for some reason it drawls...-shrugs- anywho, please update soon!

I like it, update soon. :)

I Heart ?

:( give him my condolences... ill pray for him ... and take your time... he needs someone right now...

The beginning is SUPER interesting! I really really really can't wait 'til the nxt chapter!

oh wow, this sounds super good so far
now im gonna be able to read everything when it gets updated, my computer got fixed

Cool! I luv it!