I'm in the middle of Survive at the moment

EvilmathXP

Course this poem is as awesome and sarcastic as ever my friend. The little dashes inbetween each stanza kept throwin me off for some reason(you know me- im crazy like that)

love ya!

I like how the theme/message of this poem (brief and harsh) is reflected in the rhythm and length of the lines (also short and harsh). An interesting synergy, and I like it. Great work!

Get up.

Survive.

Go back to bed.

Got it ;D