|Reviews for The Cycle|
| Filly and Phips 10/6/09 . chapter 1
I'm in the middle of Survive at the moment
Course this poem is as awesome and sarcastic as ever my friend. The little dashes inbetween each stanza kept throwin me off for some reason(you know me- im crazy like that)
| bipedalcooney 9/30/09 . chapter 1
I like how the theme/message of this poem (brief and harsh) is reflected in the rhythm and length of the lines (also short and harsh). An interesting synergy, and I like it. Great work!
| Black Sparrow 9/27/09 . chapter 1
Go back to bed.
Got it ;D