|Reviews for Shooting From the Hip|
| E. Marsel 7/20/10 . chapter 9
Just got to this chapter and its about 2 in the morning, and I am fighting my eyelids from closing because I am so enthralled and entranced by this story!
Your writing... for example
"The kiss startled her, came out of nowhere. It began a little awkwardly around the edges, tasted faintly of her surprise and his impulsiveness."
WOW... so good! I loved it.
Well on to chapter 10
| A Dreamer Always 7/19/10 . chapter 13
I absolutely love this story. It took me the whole day to get through it because I'm such a slow reader, but I was hooked after chapter 1!
This story is so intense! I love how the emotion and the drama, and its only been 13 chapters! I'm dying to find out just how this ends, x3 You've got me all excited now XD
| hooka 7/19/10 . chapter 3
yep, i'd have to agree. i don't like the beginning of this chapter at all. the phone conversation was really dull and long, so much that i was forced to skim quite a few paragraphs to get to the end of the chat.
i do like the storyline though, so i'll stay with it. :)
| blondiexoxo 7/19/10 . chapter 13
im glad u updated
i cant wait for then next chapter
i cant believe he walked away hahaha
good move tho
| madkatter 7/18/10 . chapter 13
Can't want to see the opening. I'm glad Sera said no to Bruce, or her and Griffen would be taking many steps back.
| Skyterra 7/17/10 . chapter 8
This story is on its way to becoming one of my absolute favorite stories - keep up the great work please! Don't want to disappoint! ;P Haha, just kidding. But seriously, I love this story. It's actually one of the only stories that I find myself wanting to read again and again.
Oh, and I'm slightly confused, what do you mean by "upstairs"? Doesn't Sera live in an apartment...? I've never seen an apartment with an upstairs, I don't think...
| sappyromancelvr 7/17/10 . chapter 13
Best best ever! Hope you update really soon. :)
| sappyromancelvr 7/17/10 . chapter 12
Hopefully we'll learn a bit more about their backgrounds. Great job!
| sappyromancelvr 7/17/10 . chapter 11
| sappyromancelvr 7/17/10 . chapter 10
Favorite chapter yet! :)
| sappyromancelvr 7/17/10 . chapter 9
Go Sera! :)
this makes me so excited for the next chapter!
| sappyromancelvr 7/16/10 . chapter 6
I'm really enjoying the story. Like the slow pace they are taking :)
Sera is quite the lady, especially photography, which I absolutely adore. Griffin is...mysterious.
| renegade01 7/16/10 . chapter 13
hehe, her reaction at the end was funny. ;)
| Mayuka 7/16/10 . chapter 13
That was AMAZING! Can't wait for the next time they kiss. ;)
| kissmesober 7/16/10 . chapter 13
I love this. Like beyond words I love this. Griffin is one of the best male characters I've had the pleasure of reading about since Jack in star123's So Much To Learn. Honestly, I love reading characters who develop throughout a story, and Sera and Griffin are certainly doing that here.
I can't wait for the next chapter, you're doing brilliantly.