I thought this was also very clever, I agree with Sauro and her reference to your reference to snow in the beginning.

I had forgotten how much of a solid and awesome writer you were. Thankfully I was shaken back to reality, haha.

Seriously though, the very last line struck me the most: reminds me so much of an honorable death at the hands of your opponent (not necessarily your enemy, that label of hatred doesn't suffice on this occasion).

I feel...jealous. Your improvement and diction is requiring me to also improve my skill. Well played, good sir.

how clever! I thought the opening line set a suitable scene for what was ahead, despite the simplicity. the reference to snow were beautiful, a true symphony of images and emotions. the spicy vocabulary added much effect, causing this to be a piece savored and thought upon in the future. and, of course, the ending was captivating. bien.