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Isca 2009-09-26 . chapter 1
"Reality's only something to be faced beyond these steel-framed windowpanes." I like this line. I could relate to it.

"Check your sorrow at the door." WHOA. What a great line. :D
Little girl Big world 2009-09-25 . chapter 1
"check your sorrow at the door and fall into
step with another life, another heartbeat, another kind of
hope for a better way out."
Oh wow. I find this extremely inspiring right now.
This was just a beautiful lovely piece. You're talented with your words. Nice job :)
your infection their plague 2009-09-25 . chapter 1
Full of stories of lies.
So much deceit.
Self-inflicted deceit, if I may add.

& yet, there was a ring of truth in every word. Very nice.
ForeverBehindTheImpression 2009-09-25 . chapter 1
Another great piece. The layout of it all adds a textured kind of effect to it :) Its different, and refreshing to read.
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