The imagery here...just amazing. I don't know, this just had a great feeling to it, and I could picture the scenes vividly...

gothically lovely!

"As isolated as the moon." Nice simile.

"Together we could see the stars." This is a very beautiful and romantic line. :)

"Alone in a world of creeping darkness." Oh wow. This is my favourite line--it's angsty and incredible.

"The stars aren't wanted anymore." Brilliant ending.

Aw I like it:) Very...um...poetic:]
I can't really pick a favorite part because the whole thing was beautiful, dah-ling:)
I really enjoyed it:]

"Each pinprick represents a moment
Each pattern one we found together"

and

"Because the stars aren’t wanted anymore
The moon has been deflated"

were my favourite parts! Great poem! :D

i really like the connecting sky theme, and how much of the lovely imagery is build around it. a soft, evocative and melancholic description of how a relationship changed. nice job.