|Reviews for composure|
| letyoursoultakeflight 9/29/09 . chapter 1
silent swish of fans and painted faces
- LOVE this line!
| kit feral 9/25/09 . chapter 1
I admit at times I am displaced
sailboat in the wrong ocean
I really like those lines. and great title- I love when the title isn't just a line in the poem, and actually describes it well. good work.
| kloun mannequin 9/25/09 . chapter 1
wow, I can picture the scene, I like the starting.
| Mirabella 9/25/09 . chapter 1
| your infection their plague 9/25/09 . chapter 1
Honest, in the manner of
One of those songs you whisper to yourself
All by yourself
It has the anticipation
of a held breath.