silent swish of fans and painted faces

- LOVE this line!

I admit at times I am displaced

sailboat in the wrong ocean

I really like those lines. and great title- I love when the title isn't just a line in the poem, and actually describes it well. good work.

wow, I can picture the scene, I like the starting.

Lovely imgery!

Lovely.

Honest, in the manner of

One of those songs you whisper to yourself

All by yourself

It has the anticipation

of a held breath.

Nice work.