You are quite the talent!

And as an aside... coffee is absolutely horrid so claps to you for agreeing! And I totally want to sit in a coffeeshop too... only drinking tea there wouldn't quite cut it... thank goodness for my cake/cookie/pie addiction!

For some reason the animal cruelty add sticks out in my mind - there's one with Sarah McLauglin (totally can't spell her name) singing 'in the arms of an angel' I will change the channel when that add comes on because it is just to upsetting. It ruins my day sometimes.

I liked how short and consise this was. Although I think I favored the vibe in the first half of the poem as opposed to the second. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

i'm a hot chocolate and good lyrics kind of girl.
therefore i'm nearly required to like this piece. :)

This is really good. Honest, raw, and vivid.

"I don't have the motivation to walk over the river." I like how relatable this line is. I'm not much of a morning person either :P.

This is very blunt. Not a bad thing. And those animal cruetly ads are terrible...

I liked this. It's very blunt and real.