This is the BEST gay romance story I have EVER read!

I really liked this story. I laughed, cried, got angry & got aroused at all the relevant parts, & that is what a really good story should do, namely draw its readers in until they forget all about the real world. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Seth's dialogue was choppy and sounded kinda forced and unreal, but very heart wrenching regardless. I like how your sex scenes are so blunt. No dancing around the subject. But I guess in this day and age it'd be called "explecit"? At some points I was confused who was talking. I think you got some name labling wrong. I'm a bit skeptical that 40 year old man would cum 5 times in one night, but I guess this virgin's got a lot of time to make up for. Lol.

A very catching story. Again two nice guys i really liked. And a very nice scenery you created. But i begin to fear your female charaters have a really high breast cancer risk.

Oh and btw i really enjoy the sex scenes you write, always full off emotion.