|Reviews for Innocent Love|
| Savella 9/26/09 . chapter 1
Aw, that was really sweet! I'm a sucker for cute stories like this!
I'd give you some sort of constructive criticism, but I don't have much to give. Maybe you can add an extra space between the kids' points of views so that they don't get jumbled together when you read, but that's about it. I can't think of anything else. Keep up the good work!