Whoa, this is spooky...and creepy in a dark sort of way... I love it! You really 'painted' a scene in my mind. I could see it all happening =). Twas a great poem !

Okay, I'll admit it: I'm lazy. There are so many good elements to this poem, but I don't really wanna take the time to figure out what they are:) It's just GOOD and no matter how eloquently I put it, it all comes back to that.
So write on, laugh often, and beware of evil meatballs and their armies of mutated tree frogs:)

Hey,
OMG that was scary :| It was really good though, really REALLY well described!! :D:D Great work!!
ranDUMM

"Crisp as fallen leaves
A heart is being rearranged"

I loved that part! I also liked the sound effects and the imagery. It was amazing :D

FLIppin Yeah, man! THis rocks!

"The footsteps follow her." Chilling.

"A heart is being rearranged." Wow. This is wicked and haunting.