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| DreamingEternal 9/28/09 . chapter 1
I love the art theme woven throughout this piece!
Favorite lines: "my artist's eye doesn't know where to begin" and "you're smooth, the focal point of my whole made-up world"
Such wonderful imagery and symbolism! I'm a very literal person, so I've never been able to write something slight abstract like this piece, and I envy your ability to translate real life into shapes, colors, and feelings.
| rolliepollie44 9/27/09 . chapter 1
Mm, this is lovely.
Beautiful imagery, slightly menacing the way you put certain things but I really, really love how you wrote it. Aw you're word choice, adjectives, all that stuff is just phenomanal with the theme of the peice.
Love how you started it, love the line "you're my new favorite color." I really, really enjoyed it. :D
| May Elizabeth 9/27/09 . chapter 1
This was intresting. The imagery and the flow I just loved. :D