I think the lady on the bus is right. How can anyone live the same day over and over again without going insane? Even if you have someone for company and there are plenty of things to do, there's no way to forge new relationships, change things that you regret.. because it keeps looping over and over again.

That said, this story has an interesting premise, is fanciful and fun, but also sort of maddening and... even if Tobias isn't going crazy, I can only imagine how Leander survived 6 months before Tobias got stuck in the loop as well.

Will they ever get out?

I'm sure writing 70,0 words about Jewish smut is doable. What kind of society are you going to write about it in? War-like/supernatural/high school/post-high school/other?

Aw, I'm gonna miss updates in November. The tension in this story is excrutiating (in an entirely positive sense). I missed it recently, too, so I hope things get less stressful! I mean, for you, not just because I am a whore for this fic. Luckily I am also a whore for stories about redheads, though, because I am narcissistic like that. I think there should be a boat. Somewhere in the story. Because I would like to be on a boat right now, I think. As a redhead, I can certify that redheads enjoy boats, as a result of the latent Viking in our genes. That's my two cents, but after all the Irish coffee I've had tonight, you may take it as you will. Good luck with NaNo. :)

Um, so, gay Jews are my favorite? I was about to be like NANO RUINS EVERYTHING BECAUSE NOBODY UPDATES THEIR AWESOME STORIES BECAUSE THEY'RE OFF POSTING STUPID MEANINGFUL ONES THAT ARE SUPPOSED TO WIN SOME STUPID THING. But then you said my two favorite phrases. "Explicit gay sex" and "Jewish." So. Yeah. I've got nothing. If I had something, I'd be doing Nano myself. Which I'm not. Because I've got nothing.

Um like. You should just have a narrator that likes repetition and rambling. That's also a good word filler. Like. "This was not not not supposed to happen. It was... it was... what was it? It was something that nobody had ever seen before, and it was freaking amazing and wonderful and it was... it wasn't supposed to happen! It shouldn't be like this!"

See, I just wrote like a paragraph about nothing. An incredibly LAME paragraph, but a paragraph nonetheless. Rambling characters help with word count. I just realized this. I should keep that in mind. Maybe I could write an absolutely pointless story for nano and then it might turn out to be meaningful because underneath all its meaninglessness, I could make something symbolic and then toss a pot of angst in there and everyone would love me.

Haha, James Patterson. I just described James Patterson. Whoops.

I love this story. You know, just this morning, I was like, this story never updates, and then you did, and I was so super happy. I like them so much. Sorry about the retarded review. Like, I hate when people do that to me, so I don't know why I do that to other people, but whatever. It's like, if you didn't want to read it, you wouldn't, and if you don't want to reply to it, you won't. I mostly just review to amuse myself, I guess, and then I guess in the back of my mind I hope that I've helped the author somewhat, or at least vaguely amused THEM.

Anyway. Great story. Great chapter. Love it all. Leander and Tobias are my favorite. Great job. The end. Goodbye. And good luck with whatever crazy homojewsex you come up with. I will find it, mark my words. And chances are I'll like it.

'Explicit gay sex' sounds like a pretty fabulous idea to me. I suppose 50,0 words of it might get a little dull, though. I GUESS. Personally I am a big fan of fantasy and sci fi stuff, because there's just so many exciting possibilities. I also really like culture clash - where someone ends up in a culture they know little about, whether it be another world, another country or simply another social class, and confusion and misunderstandings and discovery ensue. I just really love going along with a character in that kind of adventure. I also like magic, violence and boys with guns.

Good luck! I look forward to reading whatever you end up writing.

Whoohoo! An update!

Hahah, I love that old lady! xD Reminds me of my grandomther.
Tobias and Leander are making my stomach squirm. I'm so afraid one of them is going to do something and then the other will freak out and things will be all awkward between them.
Can't wait for the next chapter. (:

I adored this chapter. I can't pinpoint any particular thing about it. I love the dialogue, the plot, the description, the chemistry. Pretty much everything. Definite win~

I liked how you worked Leander staying up into it too.

I hope this next week is better for you, sweet. Easier mayhaps.

lovelovelove.

Did I ever tell you how much I like the title of this thing? It fits perfectly.

Whoa, random creeper lady. Weird.

This story is really cool. It makes me feel weird. I don't really know how to explain that, but it's a good thing.

Good chapter :) They're so cute, I just like... gah. I like these characters a whole freaking lot.

I liked the going backward bit, and the lady with the lazy eye. Cant wait for the next chapter.

This is a great story so far!
I'll take shorter chapters, and faster updates any day.

This story is so quirky and funny and charming, and I love the way the two boys act around each other, like, very awkward and real. Also that Tobias tried to stay up, to wait it out, because I always thought that's what I would do. So... yeah. Really good.

It's way too early for my brain to function, but YOU'RE SO INCREDIBLY GOOD AT DIALOGUE I LOVE IT YOU EVERYTHING.

Aw. They're precious. I adore this story :)