well that's very interesting and different
good writing too
you do sometimes forgot the closing speech marks

This is so beautifully written. It just flows; there's no stopping or starting and even though it's only short it still captured my full attention.

The way you've written an emotion where there's no emotion at all is so incredible. Her numbness, her feeling of nothing is so strong. It's so captivating.

Just one thing: in the third paragraph you wrote "her eyes are kind behind the class wall of my room." Is it meant to be glass instead of class?

KayLee Cee.