I'm really liking this so far... Nick is definitely an interesting character- the redneck issue is a good change from just "geek." I'm looking forward to reading more of this!

ah :(

one thing confused me though. if he's just receiving the news, how has he seen it "too many times"?

Nice update! i dont have an account so didnt review before.

looks like the mom wants to commit suicide...and is that a sneak hint in dave's past?

AWW thats so sad he gets picked on so much! and all b/c he lives in a trailer?

I like the way you write its very pretty and descriptive! faves!

Another great story! Your second installment, eh, well i BET IT'S GOOD AS ALWAYS. I love the characterization and just the whole plot. There's a little something in it that stands out. I can tell this is going to be something worth reading.

Wow...what losers those jocks. and lol porcupine that was a funny simile! I really liked this. good job.

this was really enjoyable. i luv the character dave i thinkk he's sp real and nice. the other kids are so messed up, gosh red neck? RED NECK? who says taht ne more?

yes. he does need somebody. and i would quite like hippie boy to be that somebody :P

this looks really promising cant wiat for more!

I like it, especially the ending.