Has a very poetic feel to it. Seems a little nostalgic to me. It's sweet.

Nice. Very poetic. Kind of creepy seeming...

"It winked at us from the subtle parts of night
A cataclysmic sight."

I really like the imagery of this line :)

Because you told me to only read the first one, I am going to only review on the first one, even though I read all of them. I really like this. The rhyme in the first stanza is spectacular, and the stanza beginning with "November" is my favorite. I love the image of the piano fingers being bent, it's so macabre and wonderful. The next line kind of made me grin...you know why (long range abortions, that's all I have to say). This poem kind of perfectly sums up the strange feeling that I am feeling right now. Thank you...

When I read this I felt a little unqualified (is that the word?), because the impact they had on me and the meaning I drew from them is almost certainly not what you intended. But that's also the great thing about this song--it can't be translated, per se, but there is enough clarity in the lyrics that the emotional "core" leaps out at me. Does that make sense?

"You made us pull our secret parts out of the dark/Thinking it wouldn't leave a mark...See/I'm in love with a sound." I love transitions like that; it kind of goes from the candid to the cryptic. By the way, I'm mostly commenting on these lyrics in the context of how they would sound in a song...as words themselves they deserve a lot more than this. Let me just say that this song had a lot of meaning for me personally. I'm curious, your lyrics tend to mention a "you"...are you referring to a specific person, or a type of person, or part of yourself, etc. etc.?

For some reason the beginning stanza puts me off a little bit. The phrasing is slightly awkward, and it doesn't particularly hold together or connect to the rest of the lyrics--superficially at least. In a poem this wouldn't be so much of an issue, but in a song I think the beginning should be a little more "grounded." I'm really bad at explaining myself.