While this story may not be to the same epic proportions of JtG...I gotta admit: I'm glad this one's mine when you go. Honestly, Ro, I absolutely LOVE it. It's simply...Perfect!
I mean, to anyone not involved with wedding planning, it's almost going a bit too far. However, for someone in the midst of it, this story is definitely a reality.

I love how honest and real the characters are. None are flat, or obvious sterio-types of a personality. (With the exception of the twins. But they're the twins.) Each have a very nice dimension to them. =)

P.S. Thanks for totally freaking me out for October 10th of next year (the decided date...YAY!). In case I didn't tell you, it's outside. If it rains...I'm blaming you...And making you write another story. LOVE YOU!

lol, okay so i started reading this when you first posted it ut stopped about a quarter way in to this chapter because i got distracted, no dout y something shiny, can't remember exactlly what it was now.

Anyway, i'm going to be honest and lt yo know, that even the second time roiund, it was hard to get into this chapter at the beginning, i wish i could tell you why that was, but im not sure, it sort of lacked the pull factor i gue that i normally associate with so much of your work, anyway, as i read on i got reeled in so, whatever it is, it chould not be to hard to rectify. um ,yeah.

I liked the end by the way, the line , "it's always been you, always! MARRY me" is just to funny, and i feel like it should go in to a book of 'stupid/funny things said whilst drunk".

=]

OH awesome, jail huh? Can't wait to find out why. I loved how they were cheering for them, and Adam scowling- love it!

Oh. My. God. UPDATE SOON!

Cute! Love the entrance into the adjoining room and pool incident, LOL! Pete and Casper seriously need to do something to win their women back, pronto. The fighting doesn't seem to be working so maybe romance will do the trick. Looking forward to reading more soon. Did I mention I SO love reading this from a male's POV!

i think i love this story, haha. can't wait til the next update!

Aww, how sad! Poor Caz. By the way, Ro, I totally love the fictional big bro; he's pretty freaking awesome. But he needs to end up with Delancey...like...NOW! Instantly. I'm going to die if they don't.
Oh, and the Petey thing, definitely cute. I love it!
p.s. Banana hammock? Eww! Totally icksome!

oh, that is v.good so far. can't wait for more :) update soon.
Hazuki x

Sorry that I never leave reviews like, "OMG, this was totally wicked! Pz Right more!" ...Ok, so I'm not sorry for actually using proper grammar, but for not admitting that the story is very well written. I love it Jons, really.

Concerning the author's note, you have absolutely no idea how much I want to say "This story is an abomination!" just so I can get you to write an additional tale. The reality is, it's making me smile.

Peter Wright:
1) I love you!
2) I should have known. Both names.
3) You're perfect.
4) I can't wait to see how you do this.


Finally, I adore the ending. Very cute. =)

I really like it, very cute and funny story. His personality is really great, he can be such an idiot but I love it. Can't wait to read more and find out what Delancey thinks about what happened.

Haha, I'm glad you're having fun with this! Keep it up, because I love it (:

yay i likes it. update soon pls, cos this is v.good. :)
Hazuki x

hahhaha. love the ending of this chapter! can't wait to see how this all happens!

Hey Jons,
Couple 'a' notes here. I love that this is a bunch of presents for me...but really for yourself.

"Dyed black hair" ...That would make him an emo blond child, right? ;)
"two [butt]-less twigs." it's a good thing you didn't describe me, because that would definitely make us NOT siblings. =P
Delancey? Aw, now you get your own "April" and "Rachel" moment.
"Zebra-like hair" Haha! You're adorable...but you'll always be my Skunky.
"Katrina Black" always a kitty, always 16...at least we got rid of the latter. =P
Btw, Randy's a totally awesome bad-guy name. ;)

Finally, not gunna lie, the story is a bit more risque than I would read...but that's because I'm me and a "tad" more the innocent...Always will be. Still, I'm going to support you and encourage you to write and do good with what you were blessed. Love ya, Ro!

P.S. Woulda called yesterday, but I totally have a crapload of hw due tomorrow. I'm absolutely abhorring child development. =K That's my "Ar, I have fangs and will bite you!" face. Yep, you know you love me. ;)

I'm loving everything about this story - the setup, the plot and the characterisation.

It's freaking brilliant already - especially how its from a snide guy's POV. Keep it up, darling!