If you'd stated that it was a truth serum at the beginning that might have been helpful (here was I thinking it was some kinda love potion or something), but this was creative and cute and HAH THE FIGHT SCENE was totally hot. x]

I'm very glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:

this was so adorable!!

cute! wish my review could be longer but all i can think is SO CUTE!

It amazes me how you can make such endearing characters in a one shot!! Most people can't do it! Many think that one shots are easier to write than full scale stories, but in fact, they can be harder to write sometimes cos you have to create realistic characters in a short amount of words. Both my friend and I adore this little one-shot. Except that she wants to actually make the truth serum so that she can truth me into confessing my feelings to the guy I have liked for two years. =O Haha, good thing she can't eh? :) xoxo

Hehe. ^_^

I thought this was adorable. Thumbs up on another great read!

Lol the oblivious matchmakers always create lovely reads like yours.

aw this was really cute =)

This was adorable :)

Very cute :)

I loved it. The whole idea and the characters and the humor and Marty, heheheeh.
JM

la very good as always.

Awesome lip-gloss. Haha. That would really make college a little unboring. Waiting for the next burst of craziness..

Sukanya

aw. just too cute.

Fantastic! LOL. Light and amusing.

This is me owing you. Debt paid, interest and all. (Until the next time you work yourself into exhaustion...)

I liked that this had the whole cupidy thing going - kind of makes up for that story that you - ahem - DITCHED. (Wow, I'm not getting over it, am I?)

And boys beating up boys is all fine, but maybe you should dedicate a story to a girl pwning them. You can call it PWNED - I give you permission.

"What about Marty and me?" just might be correct grammar actually...I always get confused over it, but I tried to figure it out by reading an article a few months ago and I could have sworn they said you can end a sentence with 'me'. (Something about reading the sentence individually - 'What about Marty?', 'What about me?' - and if it makes sense that way then it's right. Or something. GOOGLE! :D)

Oh, and you said Avalon spotted "two hot pink pairs of converse" coming her way, and then Lindsey kicks her with "killer sparkly silver stilettos". Discrepancy, or am I dumb?

- Rebekah

P.S. Tell Marty to ship some of that stuff over to my place...