everything in my heart, said in four little lines.

very beautiful.

That ALMOST made me cry and there is only 22 words!I totally felt my stomach drop as i read the last line! I Loved it!

wow, this is great! Short but very well written. You explained it excellently! I know exactlt how you feel. I'm going through the same thing.

Thanks for your review and favorite!

Much can be expressed in few words, if they are the right words. Yours are.

I know exactly how you feel. You're so happy when you see him, but then *she* comes and he hugs *her*, and you feel a longing for something you can never have, and jealousy that ends up stealing your happiness. Great wording on the poem, though.

very very bitter. I can feel the passion of anger behind it!