its very juvenile, definitely quite a good read for kids and young teenagers.

the narration in first person is quite well done, i sort of like it. but something feels out of place, its like the story is not very smooth flowing.

anyway, keep up the good work!

The battle between girl and werewolf is interesting, but your chapters need more depth. Not gore, though. It goes without saying that gore will come. Focus more on the internal battle that the girl wages with herself and you will have quite a stroy here.

you could've used another name. dun use mine. (from ur friend who is a stalker)

Great chapter! I'd like to see Gladys' POV

That is really good. But it seems kind of distant. Maybe if you added stronger detail it would make the reader more interested.

But other than that I really like it, please keep it up!