"There's a storm on the horizon." Nice use of pathetic fallacy. :)

Oh my God, I so liked your poem. The last two lines... Wow. You're good.

Welcome back to fictionpress. I've missed your poems, and I'm glad you've posted more for me to read. I really, really like this piece. The metaphors are unique without being incomprehensible, and the flow and the imagery is wonderful. I love the last two lines. The whole piece is gorgeous but those just tie it up so perfectly, the contrast of weak and wonderful but at the same time I can relate to the feeling you are describing. Great work. Keep writing!

-r.p.