|Reviews for Autumn Breeze|
| fatbird33 5/30/10 . chapter 1
| Destinyhope2534 10/25/09 . chapter 1
Very nice! However, there is always room for improvement! Consider refraining from listing, more description, and maybe a less-obvious rhyme scheme! The general gist of the poem is excellent! Remember: Writing is, in it's own way, an art. Strive for creativity and pour out your heart. The rest will follow soon enough! It may seem a little rough at first, but it's all worth it in the long run!
| awake and dreaming 9/29/09 . chapter 1
guess who were the first two people to read this poem? :)
me and lauren.
this is awesome.
| alliemay1994 9/29/09 . chapter 1
i liked this a lot, good description. maybe next time use a little more color in the descriptions, i think it helps out the image a lot. good job!