Hey! It's been awhile, hope you are doing well. I really liked this, but what do not I not like of yours? lol The in parathesis bits were a great tie in, adding an echo effect to the piece. Very well written! :D

Hey,
Well... if it's based off real feelings, I'm slightly troubled. Are you okay? Poem-wise, it's a really good poem, and glad that you found a way to express your feelings, but those feelings aren't very great feelings. :) Good poem.
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"My heart keeps tracking on
That same song
(It’s skipping the important parts)"

I really liked those lines! I'm definitely favouriting this one, because I feel like this sometimes, and it's such a beautifully written poem (I feel like randomly telling you that I'm at school still, and I hear someone playing "Don't Stop Believin" but I don't know where it's coming from) :D

wow this is really good I like it. Makes you think about what people really do think about when they lie to one another