Hi! I accidentally stumbled upon your poem and well, I decided to read it. The poem was full of emotion but some parts of it are somewhat fragments (lines that are hard to understand because the lines preceding and following it are not related to that line). :D I'll give this an OK, but I know you can do better. You can still improve this...

Komapsumnida! :)

Aww...this is sad and sweet. For some reason I feel like I can relate to this...I'm trying to figure out who it reminds me of, though...-ponders-

But anyways, it was really good!

salamat pala sa pagreview. :D

I can relate to this, even though I am an only child. Really I do..kasi..basta :D

keep up the good work!