Wow, great jobb on this! I'ts sad but true the state our world is in. But there is always hope,Jesus Christ, Praise the Lord!:) I loved that you put verses at the end. Good work, God bless :)
you_no_me 2009-10-01 . chapter 1
I heard on the news about the guy that almost went to jail for praying (Blessing his food). Sad isn't it? Anyhow back to your poem. Truth well spoken. Loved the ending as well. Verses are awesome too. Keep'em coming, love your work.
Wow...this was just so great. You did a fantastic job on what's happening. Interesting fact, if you notice businesses that have values and keep them (places like Chik-Fa-la) stay in business and do well. But when the company gets rid of it's values it goes out of business (think Enron). God Bless you. Keep spreading the word.