Hey!! i love your plot, idea, whatever you wish to call it.
There are many stories about people with powers, but I've never seen one quite like this one. The beginning is a little fast, but it actually makes sense (which is more than i can say about other stories I've read, in which the author assumes the reader is all-knowing, and seems to start halfway through the plot, and then the reader is totally lost; i speak from experience), so keep it up! I can't wait to see where you take this story (I'll check for updates every once in a while...). (oh! i also commend you on your grammar; it gets annoying, reading stories that lack good grammar =D)

Hey girl it's me! Nice WORK!! Why did you never tell me about this story? Nice job!