yes that would be cool selena. just cool.

so long. but good. kya gotta go.

hello good job i have nothing to say right now. so good job! i'll send you an email when i have come up with a name for this wonderful story.

hello,

I have not read the story. but i bet it is good. i'm off to give the computer back to my dad. but i will read it later. and no i did not notice because i did not read it. cheers x3
Skye malina

I think that everything in this story happens much too quickly for my pace, that's just my opinion, but it's probably just me.

You named that water elemental Melodie, and I was like, "ha! Melodie!" It's not really supernatural things that I dislike, but I think it's really cute. And this is my real review, to let you know, because when I reviewed first, I didn't really read it, I just skimmed over it. But now I'm at computers, really bored, and can't think of a buisness idea. So great story, and, out of question, is this how the story ends?

Well, I never said I hated magical creatures...they're alright, but I just never found the interest in reading vampire stories or harry potter books because I never want to be caught in the obsession.

To be honest, this story so far just made me skim over it instead of reading it. But I promise to read it...that is...if you love MY stories... I wish I were a good writer!

hey,

i like this selena. i just think it needs a bit of work. think it over. you never know it may be better soon. keep going i'd love to read more stories from you.

skye writer xoxo

how does this relate to the rest of the story?

Love it!! But I think you should improve your summary - it'll get you more readers. Update soon!!

~~Amy

Really good! Keep going!

Ok, with this one I am going to be a little less friend of yours and a little bit more writer but only because I want you to better yourself and become great even further than me.

I like the plot and the story itself it's interesting, it's capturing but your taking it too fast. In only a matter of minutes the girl arrived and found out she's a fairy and taken it all too lightly. It's good! Don't take me wrong but it could be better. All the while, I don't know anything about the others... or Keira for the matter... So you should give the characters a chance to shine. Also, I would recomend to surprise the reader. Instead of simply saying, 'we're fairies your a fairy' go more for a strange thing happen and suddenly much later when it was forgotten oh she's a fairy and thats why this happened all that time before. I think that's all the things I noticed that could be bettered but for the rest its all good, I really like the plot and Keira and the fairies, of course =D


I do hope to read more soon and keep up the good work and don't discourage yourself, you are good.

Luna =D

PS. Thanks for the shoutout! That was really sweet of you!

I really enjoyed it. I think the idea has been a little worn out by other writers, but the way that you write is very good. I would also like to give you some advice on the describing of the charecter. I think that instead of putting it al into one paragraph, you should stretch it out and lace the other paragraphs with reasons to realize the charecter's details.

I hope that made sense.

Thank you, keep on writing!