"A mistake, it was." lolz I don't know if you intentionally did this but from that line it reminds me of Yoda from star wars

I really like the poem

this isn't going to be the best review

all I can think of to describe this

is...

I cant it such a poetic poem and It's so deep that I cant think of the right words to say

I've read so many poems about the world ending and I love the fact that although it's implied to be dark, I like that you didn't make it darker by adding some scary metaphor or something with a message that means NO HOPE FOR MANKIND.

I really love this poem it's so

simple yet

EXTRAORDINARY