I was so excited to find time to finally read this. Now that I know it's a cliff hanger, I kind of wish I'd waited. I can't wait until the next one!! (btw I like this chapter a lot--things are happening!)

This is very different from your other stories I've read, but I like it. It certainly has my attention as much as Forgotten does right now. In fact, I've neglected my own NaNoWriMo writing today to read both of them. Looking forward to updates while I try to figure out what the deal is with Damien. And Violet.

whoa lol this was awesome and alot of questions are now going through my head but not as bad as macy lol anywaz I cant wait to find out everything and the description of that woman was kinda like a vampire? hm well I dont know evel cliff hanger!

To be honest I don't know whether to thank you or say why haven't you updated before. I'll stick with saying your update couldn't have come at a better time.
I've been stressed out with coursework, so this was a great reprieve (or something like that)... lol, it takes a toll on you.
I'm glad I had something to read when I finished, but at the same time you had to stop at that point didn't you?
Things are becoming much more interesting, especially as Damien is acting differently, it'd give even me the creeps, especially as he wasn't doing anything to reassure her; even if it wasn't obvious.
I love it though! I can't get enough of this story, so I hope that the next update will be soon! Hint!

Aside from that, how have you been keeping? Haven't seen you around lately, nevermind I don't normally have the time any more.

Tecna ;)

OMG It IS Violet! :O I am so anxious to know what is up with Damien.. what's so bad about him? Will Macy go on the trip with him? Goodness, woman, this is such an evil cliffhanger! lol

Aw, but Damien is so cute when he's being mischievous. Ahh I love guys with dimples, haha. And I can't believe they're fake-engaged! This chapter was definitely interesting, and I hope you update soon!

Please update grly

eek, loved it.

o!! i already know shes gonna go with him to Scotland still. omigawd!!
keep writing!

Glad that you updated!! So, I'm thinking Edna and her friends are actually Damien's victims and if Macy doesn't watch out, she is going to turn into one for them.

I'm enjoying how you give us just enough to draw us in, but not enough to ruin the mystery. You make me very curious!

"Okay/"; Typo?

About the engagement ring...it doesn't make sense to me that it was passed down from his maternal grandmother to his mother, because wouldn't his dad have given his mom an engagement ring of his own? I mean...erm, this is hard to explain...Damien's dad would have had to procure a ring on his own when he proposed, not borrowed his future mother-in-law's ring. (I don't think I made sense...ask me on Twitter or something if you're still confused.)

- Rebekah

well...is Damien a vampire?

i feel like Macy will not be able to take-off her ring!

Can't wait to see if she will go to meet his family!! Wonder what they will be like!

well, seeming as how he is going to be her stalker, whats-her-face-"hottie" can have him. she can get stalked all she wants. and just wait, a person in a car(me) will accidently hit a certain someone(Jolene) and she will not do so well afterwards(she will die.) in my mind at least. . . lol haha keep writing!

10 days...when's the next chapter?

so are the people in scotland non-humans?