What a surprise at the end! Wow, this is really good. I hope you continue with this, because I'd love to know more about the characters and plot; it's all very intriguing. Please write more (:

haha...this has the makings of a very fun story! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. About how old are Lia, Macy and Damien supposed to be?

-Tin :)

Okay, I'm hooked!

What on earth is the story? Come on, come on, come on!

Tell me, tell me, tell me!

Yeah... getting repetitive - but for a good reason!

So... update, update, update!

I can't seem to form sentences, well, yeah I can, but... ugh!

Just update will you!

Jeez!

It's so not fair!

Hurry up! I'll keep bugging you! You know I will!

Tecna ;)

oh i'm intrigued

very intrigued

Damien sounds like SUCH a hottie :D

can't wait for more of this story

izzie

Ever got a chance that you have a picture of both Damien and Macy? xD

Damien sounds hot.

What an original story! You really sparked my interest, I can't wait to read more.

What à teaser chapter! :)

holy shamoly! whut!

omg, update!

update!

i am so lost. xD

Love it!

lol That was not only funnt but hilarious The Lord has truly blessed you with the talent of making stories!

update soon please!

Okay, wow, this is up somewhere high on my list of "Best First Chapter" for stories on FictionPress! Is this the piece you're writing for NaNoWriMo? Because if you're going to update regularly...wow. I might love you.

(That was creepy...I'll go away now.)

Please update soon, despite my weirdness! :)

- Rebekah

This looks promising !

Goode luck for your NaOcWriMo ;)

MissusFinklex

Awesome story! I really like it and I can not wait to read more!

Oh, what a nice little teaser! What a great description of Damien.

Loved it! I wonder how they ended up married. Please continue writing! Great hook!