This is sweet in a special way. I think it would make an interesting song if it was expanded slightly. Nice poem :)

I thought this was really sweet. The swear spoiled it somewhat. It just didn't seem to fit. It had a very sweet and nice ending though. :)

Ooh, I can imagine this as a catchy song - the kind of upbeat music that's sort of in-your-face and yet utterly cute. =) Nicely written. Thanks for sharing~

What a charming love poem! If you wrote it to a real person, I am sure you two must be very happy together. If not, it is still a good poem.

"Push them away." I love this part of the piece--it's so powerful. :)

Aw, that made me smile a lot. :) It was very sweet and made my heart happy. ^_^ Great job! -Qzie

beautiful poetry i like the tittle
very nice, keep it up