this was a very honest, touching piece. nice job:)

The emotion you can put into your poetry (or words, if you don't call these chapters poems even though I totally think they are but WHATEVER) is amazing...really, and it's just so honest and raw and SATISFYING to read, I know that sounds weird, but to see these things written and think "THAT'S TOTALLY WHAT THAT FEELS LIKE" (ch. 1, if you're interested, is what really struck me that way) is just pretty awesome, and speaks volumes of your writing skillz. Anyway...I'm jealous. :D Your writing style is beautiful. I can't explain it, let me find the words. I think it's the honest simplicity and your way with descriptions - you don't use many words, but just enough of the right ones if that makes sense...hm, and the endings of your writings are always really strong, too. "I need you now" from your awesome beach poem, and the ending to chapter one...both strong endings. =D

I'm leaving you this long review because no one ever really does on this site and you deserve them. Also I guess I should pay more attention to fictionpress goings on so I catch these new pilloqbooks as you post them. =D

That is intense. Not kidding, it was amazing. You managed to give off such strong feelings with such few words. Seriously, I loved it.