|Reviews for High School Crush|
| Guest 2/10/13 . chapter 1
LOL thats cute
| Aaron 2/4/13 . chapter 1
this is so awsome can i use it in a song?
| nikki 12/1/12 . chapter 1
its so sweet wish he knew i loved him
| Guest 11/4/12 . chapter 1
very good i couldnt stop reading
| Justme 1/29/10 . chapter 1
My all time favorite, from the first time I read it I fall in love with ur poem
| XxXOoO 10/26/09 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh xD
That was amazingly sweet :D
Love ur poems ]
| CursumPerficio 10/13/09 . chapter 1
I love how it sounds like an actual high school student with the small slang and behaivor ("...for that stupid math test") ("I'm so fusterated I can almost cuss)...but how poetic it is at the end, like a high schooler's dream.
My favorite lines are "Around you I’m burning up, But without you I’m shivering." and "When the war is lost you make it seem like I’ve won." They're really big differences, but united in such a fitting way :) I also like in the beginning where you described how the crush made the character feel from hugging, to his legs going weak (Great transmission!)
Keep up the good work!
How It All Ends
| fairytalefantasistx3 10/3/09 . chapter 1
Nice! I really like this :)
I absolutely love these two lines:
'Around you I’m burning up,
But without you I’m shivering.'