Great story. I loved the characters, and the way you wrote it. You managed to tell a lot in a short time. Good work.

fun fact: i also had this story idea with the whole road trip thing (kind of) going on for forever, and i've only got, like, a chapter down so far, but yeah. anyway...

gorgeous! :D

i really like this so far, but the only thing i have to say about it is that it seems a little too fast paced. i think, if i were you, i'd hold out on the abortion confession (which is a great twist, by the way) for a couple more chapters. continue!

Well. Well. WELL. I enjoyed it immensely. It's...so much deeper than I expected, but it's also alarmingly hilarious. You throw in some stuff and just like that it's BAM. Fucking awesome sonuvabitch story. I loved it.
D.A.L

Beautiful.

So many writers use the abortion thing almost unnaturally. The emotions are realistic here and I like that.

And so ready for when you update Waiting on the W.

haha you do get crabby when you don't eat :)
damien sounds hott
find one for me?