Whoa...like a shocked wow kinda whoa...I really like that broken kind of style. I hope some of that wasn't true? Yikes...I really liked it though. More people should read this and maybe people wouldn't be so rude or stereotypical or sexist. It's really inspirational and well written for the style in my opinion, as if it came straight from a compilation home video or something.

i liked it. :)

I reminds me a lot of real life.

The emotions or lack there of...

I don't really know, but it kind reflects what I feel at times. Except completely not. Hm? Is that confusing.

Like I've felt emotions like that, but about other things.

I mean when she was thinking about her story and how it was being read infront of her class...I can totally understand.

Then whe she's talking about how she's not really part of her group. I can kind of understand the feeling.

I've never had any of the lesbian experiances, but when there are times when I try telling people how there are times when I get depressed but they always laugh it off and be like "No you're not. I've never seen you like that."

Haha. You probably don't want to hear this. :) So anyway. I really liked it and found it wasn't hard to follow at all.

I really can't say anything to this, its amazing. I hope to read more.

Powerful vignettes. Sometimes the shortest pieces can all come together no matter how random they seem, they all speak of some common truth, some common meaning and I think this piece really did that well. Thank you for sharing this.