Entertaining...

Great story, it is captivating and my imagination can't figure out where it will go next because it could go several ways! Keep it up!

Wow. This is really good. Its one of those stories that makes you want to keep reading.
Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what you do next!

Sweet story. I just found it, and it sounded interesting. It's good so far. I'd like it better if your chapters were a bit longer but whatever it's still entertaining. Keep it up... Thanks!