I loved it great job

UPDATE SOON

love it so far =) update soon!!

Very nice. I wasn't sure at first if I liked it or not. The first chapter was a little strange. It was well written but maybe a little plain? But by the end of the third chapter I was sure I loved it. Good work, keep it up. Please update soon, I can't wait for more. I like your writing style and the unconventional take on werewolves.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Okay, so I'm a bit confused here. Still love it, but how old is Helena now? And didn't she already go to someone's house and stay? Does she have to go again or something? And Emma is a nickname for Emily? And I'm guessing Laura is the family's daughter even though her name told to the main character until the last line when it magically became her name (that's how it felt to me). Also, I have to compliment you again, I LOVE your descriptions and style of writing! But it wasn't clear as to what was happening or what has happened between Chapter One and Chapter Two :) GOOD JOB!

I really like this. I'm very critical of writing too, so not to be cocky, but it's a compliment for me to like it. Does she just call her uncle "Uncle"? Does he not have a name? Just wondering. It is unusual and it could use a tad bit of touching up, but it's great! I love the descriptions you use. You write very well!

What a nice story, it's has a fun feel to it. Hope it wont be a problem if you could keep this story up please.