Amazing! The description of the beach was so accurate its not even funny! [Im in Florida and I was at the beach last weekend] I loved the fact that your poem didn't rhyme, yet it had an really awesome flow to it. The best part was how you gave "Summer" a personality and your good because I was visualizing the whole time!

I absolutely adore this piece! It so cute and I love your use of personification throughout it. Great imagery & the ending ties it all together nicely bringing up the season that comes after summer. This piece really was just lovely!
Favorite lines : "I see you blushing,
I know you do so through the roses,
peeking their rouged faces out at me."
+Adding to my favorites :)
Well done, I enjoyed reading this.