| Reviews for Thursday Afternoon |
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ramblingrobin 5/17/13 . chapter 1That was both hot and squeedorable. Very nice. |
Cossu 1/29/12 . chapter 1 I like. Don't make it a one shot. Pleeeeeeeeas! |
Yellow Cotton Hat 9/20/11 . chapter 1Love. :') |
Malaia 4/24/11 . chapter 1That is just the single most awesome sexy gorgeous moment. I love when stories give me that stomach burn and not make me roll my eyes from too much sweetness. This is just the perfect damn amount and I love you for it. |
seraphofreverie 1/11/11 . chapter 1that was sexy, but my favorite part was the dialogue - it gave me the giggles :D |
Zethoa 12/6/10 . chapter 1Sweet and smutty in just the right proportions. I doff my hat to you. And fave. Again. Of course, real life calls and I guess I won't get to read everything you've done. But I will be back! D |
Mewenn 11/6/10 . chapter 1I love you. That moment at the end was so sweet. I'm just a sucker for those. Oh and the hot sex doesn't make it worse either :P |
diwu6398 10/10/10 . chapter 1Fuck. I think I just had a mindgasm. WOW. I don't think I've reviewed you before (actually I'm pretty sure because I remember that I didn't like The God Eaters that much, no offense) but I sort of found you while reading some stuff and I found your review on something and somehow I got here. That was such a fail sentence... and this is a fail review. I blame it on Keane. This was uber sexy and just incredible. I usually don't like reading stories in first person (but I write it so I shouldn't be speaking/ writing) but this was really well written, so I got past that little... issue and dammit why do people enjoy spamming my inbox? This was about 1700 words on FictionPress, and the characters were tremendously developed. Um... let's see, I know there was something else I wanted to say... Never mind, I can't remember. YAY FOR FAIL REVIEWS! I basically just said I liked this. In case you didn't understand my babbling. |
Poptart Guava King 6/7/10 . chapter 1Every time I read this, I do a little...giggle/squeal/laugh thing at the fluff at the end. xD |
theearthisdoomed 5/25/10 . chapter 1This was lovely. Hot and really sweet. I'm going to check out your other stuff. |
PapaMike 3/14/10 . chapter 1Oh... *cough* that made my inner prude shut the fudge up, I'll tell you that for nothing. I was really glad to have found this, I love how the two characters interact because it's not that easy, but easy enough that it's not full of pretend angst. Deffinately a good read |
whitecrow 2/26/10 . chapter 1 Sorry me again, brains fell out. Again, what a fabulous one-shot. Echoing a previous comment - you get these characters so well in such a short space of time. And their interactions just flow so smoothly, so believably. You write brilliantly! Apologise for fangirling but see first sentence. |
anonymous 2/14/10 . chapter 1 that was just, cute. i love this line: "bed or floor? do that again and it's floor." not gonna say to write more soon, because ive seen ur profile and if i said it you might NOT update. but thanks. :) |
The Sham 1/12/10 . chapter 1I really liked this. Sickly sweet and it works perfectly. Ace. |
Jaydee Faire 1/10/10 . chapter 1Aw. That was sweet. I thought I'd try you out and I liked it! I'll have to keep working down the list. |